Whispered Thoughts by Angels Whispers at All poetry

Our thoughts are things;

They have tremendous power, we are what we think,

and all that we are, arises with our thoughts.

What we are today, comes from our thoughts of yesterday,

and our present thoughts build our life of tomorrow.

With our thoughts, we make the world,

and our life is the creation of our mind.

Thoughts of doubt and fear are pathways to failure,

so when we conquer negative attitudes of doubt and fear,

we conquer failure.

Thoughts crystallize into habit and habit solidifies into circumstances.

We should always be aware that our head creates our world.

So speak or act with a pure mind and happiness will follow you

as your shadow.....

Unshakeable!

Hello Dear Poet,
Thanking you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and review is greatly valued. I appreciate your thoughts dearly.

I hope you enjoyed the read.
Take care and many blessings to you.

Your friend in poetry.

~Angel~

The picture below is from the contest and was used for inspiration.

The Picture is from Photobucket-
Artist Unknown~

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A contest entry

...Our Thoughts Change Water... by Desire. 700 points, ended July 25, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

"constructive criticism is always appreciated"

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Desire
July 25, 2008

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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Whispered Thoughts
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the image as visual to start the Journey and then the words You painted for what stands out to me is the repetition- some may frown upon while others may smile and let it seep in- There is that saying- out of *sight* out of Mind and You don't keep it out of sight- from what I was inhaling is the focus on *Thoughts* and its importance which affects Attitude- and Performance I keep seeing Aristotle- the name as if reference importance in speech- Also getting reference Socrates - and nudged to mention how the Mind like the conductor- our Spirit fuels the body which is the train- whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in ten lines (more or less) ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth

Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
- Angels Whispers
  July 26, 2008
  
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  Desire
  
  Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and applause on my poem.I am pleased that you enjoyed the read,and i also appreciate your thoughts dearly.
  Blessings to you and take care,
  ~Angel-anne~
ckwriter69
July 21, 2008

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Very powerful statements that all of us need to realize/ Thanks for sharing them and good luck in the contest.
- Angels Whispers
  July 22, 2008
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  ckwriter69
  
  Hi Beautiful,thanks again for the read, comment, and applause.Your thoughts mean the world to me,and I am pleased that you liked the write.
  Blessings of love and happiness I send to you and your loved ones.
  Take care Babe,
  Your AP angel
  ~Angel~
Pisces rainbow
July 20, 2008

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We need only to look around,

we can see what we create by the thoughts that we hold,

burdens, they are not necessary,

we need to let go and embrace the moment,

you have written truth and created a roadmap to a life full of joy,

you have put it together beautifully.

God bless...
- Angels Whispers
  July 20, 2008
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  Pisces rainbow
  
  Hello,nice to meet you.Thank you so much for your applause and wonderful comment on my poem.I appreciate your thoughts and value them highly.I am also pleased that you liked my write.
  Take care and many beautiful blessings of love and happiness I send to you.
  Your friend in poetry,
  ~Angel-anne~