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me!

just chilling out
amongst ripples
of soft doubt

~keep wondering~

A contest entry

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Loving the metaphors
    I must say that this was a delightful piece; a brilliant way too finish off reading the entries

    Thank you for taking the time too enter;
    I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    I love the metaphors in this.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 20, 2008
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    good enough to be you... good luck


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 20, 2008

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    omgosh!

    this is such an awesome poem!!! i love the metaphors in this... appu, no one can do metaphors like you do it buddy! you just give every feeling a refreshing touch with your lovely words! you've done this so beaaautifully! keep penning gal, good luck in the contest too!

    loveis,
    Ranji


  • thesefadingstars.
    July 19, 2008

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    I entered this contest to!! I entered twice in fact...This one,I must say, Is much better than mine! I like the end "~keep wondering~" Its really good...good luck! =)

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