These eyes have seen murder,
many killed by my own hand.
No sorry's can be said for the blood
i've spilled.
None of them stood a chance as
I whispered "death comes on swift
wings"
My punishment is not only my curse...
but my weapon
Author notes
idk if u think it's good but it just came outta nowhere
A contest entry
- Points are Going up by Never.Give.Up.
1450 points, ended August 6, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i'm in a funky state right now....
Comments
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This is great and it pictured my thoughts of her being an assassion.
A wonderfull Write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
Interesting
I think that it had nice flow and meter and that the line "death comes on swift wings" really makes the piece sing. Good right for coming out of nowhere.
~mandie~
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Loved the third stanza. So beautifully short and deep. Amazing write you did here sis. ^^
Good luck in the contest.
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