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Undiscovered Beauty

Undiscovered Beauty lies beneath the sheets,
Undiscovered Beauty sleeps in solitude,
Undiscovered Beauty will soon be joined
By a man desiring, craving her warmth -

She, the desire and craving
She, the lady who dances in my dreams
She, who is the epitome of gorgeous
Is the music to my soul -

Making me dance all night long,
Making me dance to her love song,
Making me dance while dreaming
about her aroma, essence, and love.

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  • EncounteredEpiphany
    July 24, 2008

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    Bella

    Bravo this is so beautifull I can feel your love expressed so elegantley into words of art!!!!! She, who is the epitome of gorgeous Is the music to my soul!!! LO-AMO SALUTE


  • Rheea gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    uhhuh judge not unless you want to be judged

    • forbiddenpriest
      July 21, 2008
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      Okay miss
      this is about my wife.


      • Rheea gold member
        July 21, 2008
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        How wonderful for you and your wife ...... have some compassion and still judging is wrong.