I'm just a child can't you see
How could you think sexual thougts of me
Innocent was a gift from God above
But I still dont understand His love
How does one take a child so little
Doing things to her making her mind so brittle
You came in each night and there was always a different reason why
You needed me to take your tears away so you no longer had to cry
I gave my heart and soul to you
Everything we did was wrong I knew
But you saved me from the bruises from them
I choose our game over the rest because I knew I would never win
How could you look me in the eyes
And not know it hurt me so when I cried
I tried to take your pain away for you
But what happened to me was painfull too
You were gentle each night as you pushed in
Until finally your penis did win
The drugs and alcohol you gave didn't ease the pain
After the buzz wore off I cried like the rain
Washing my sheets by myself so they wouldn't know
A blanket in the car for whereever we go
Never ending of places for you to touch me
In my bed, in the car, in front of them they pretended not to see
I just want to know how you can look at a child
Think nasty thoughts and not taste bile
How does one hurt one so young and make her cry
Turned her life upside down where all she wants now is to die
Before you ever touch another child
And your mind goes all crazy and wild
Remember your not just getting a thrill
But teaching her to learn to want to kill
You will be her first victim as she was yours
because not all end up being a whore
So watch your back you sick ass
Revenge to her is you getting cass-terated
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Castration???? OH NO MY FRIEND!!! That would be way to kind......I say hang him til death hovers near, than slowly disembowl him but before death comes to retrieve his carcass tear him limb from limb and behead him so that he may never find peace in the afterlife!! People like this are not fit to be near the people that suffer their vileness. You are a survivor NOT a victim!!! Be strong and live life to the fullest.....the sweetest revenge!!! Many blessings
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These words are filled with so much emotion, and for good reason. It's absolutely terrible when things like this happen to poor innocent children. As an anti-child abuse advocate, I've heard some pretty disturbing stories and it's a scar these people will have to bear their whole lives although they never should have had to.
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This is very powerful and very sad. The emotions scream from each word. You have done a great job with this poem.
Mike
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such personal words..i don;t know what to say..other then i am sorry for your suffering, no body should go through that..
if this is something you havent shared with authorities etc..well only you will know when you feel strong enough..but that day must come, for your own sanity too
I love u darl..and please know if ya dont
im here for you
Cind's
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I can never understand why people find this necessary to do this. And yet, we still refer to them as a part of humanity. Disgusting.
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very emotional write, picture hits close to home, kinda looks like my daughter, what an eery feeling.
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Holy smokes! This is one powerful write! Your words are deep, and strong, and very real! You did an amazing job on this one! I love it!
I hope those that violate others will read this, and learn from your words!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Some people do not deserve to be around dogs yet they are dealing with children everyday how mad I get when I hear of these things what ever happened to protect the children I guess that is just to much to ask predators child abuser and rapist go free
I will never understand I am sorry love you
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i dont understand it either... my uncle only got 2 years and 8 months got out on good behavior for a sentence of 3 years to come home and do it all over again.. anyway thanks for your comments...... hugs and sorry about the contest...
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Woah. This just gave me literally chills. What a complete bastard the guy was indeed to hurt her.
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yes he is... thank you for you r comments
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wow. such an emotional piece. what a sick bastard. i am so sorry this happened to you.
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There is no way I can critically critique this poem sweetheart.. because it is raw and heartfelt and on a subject matter too close to my heart.
I often wonder the same thoughts about men that do this...
In here you ask him to think twice before he does it again to another little girl... I encourage you to report this person so that he never has that chance!! I think these kind of people never stop, they are too sick, and must be stopped.
You know... that's the only type of revenge that is worthwile... oh sure, I've written poems on revenge of this sort of thing.. similar to what you are saying here... but the only way to get revenge is to stop these people. Not do something that will only end up hurting ourselves.
And I also believe.. the best revenge on anyone who has ever hurt is, is to heal and live a full life. I hope you can do that sweetheart... I think you are on the right path, just continue and find that courage I know you have to embrace it.
This was heartwrenching and painful to read, but I'm glad you wrote it.. it needs to be said!
Much love
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im sorry
Im sorry if ive upset you.... i didnt mean to... im sorry... i had to get this off my chest.. i cant delete it if neeed be... thanks for being a awesome Mommy on here... hugs.....
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Don't be sorry sweetie.. you didn't upset me, my heart just goes out to you that's all! I think it's good to get these things off your chest... I've done it a lot and it's good to do!!
Love you!
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im trying but seems more i talk about them more i feel sucidial does that make any sence to me it dont.. but what do i know...
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That's a stage that you go through hun... hang int here and the talking about it will get easier...
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that sounds frightening that it will be easier but i know what your saying...... thanks.... hugs....
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