time goes on as i remember, of my family you were a member,
i treated you in that way each and everyday, all the
terrible things i once did say, i live with day to day,
my loss is now the price that i pay, what more could i say?
your loss of life was the price , as i treated you like i was your boss as i wasnt to you at all nice.
you tried to help me, i pushed you away, day after day.
i could i not see that you loved me, i was truly blind
and unkind to you.
i love you this much is true, i miss you.
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thank you everyone , i really hope this helps everyone appreciate the people that really love they be a mom, dad, brother, sister, girlfriend, or maybe even a boyfriend.
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don't worry
I am sure the person that you lost knew that you loved them. I know what it's like to try and try to help or make something better but jsut be treated as a annoiyence
but I still tried anyway and I never grew bitter toward the,
truly sad,the guilt you feel is really poured into this poem
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this is a wonderful song but sad at the same time and i am crying right now ia
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Sad
Sounds like an apology and if they could read it I know they would forgive you, they probably already have.
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