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Grace or Sword

Show me grace, O my Lord -
Lest I fall, on my sword.


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  • Sg
    October 5, 2008

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    Hmmm...

    Very good thought...
    If we do not receive His grace...there are those who could die upon His sword...

    Good work...never thought of this...

  • Billbard silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    Thanks very much for your entry into my Essence contest.I enjoyed reading your poem.Best of luck in the contest.

  • Amarige
    August 2, 2008
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    very powerful lines..best of luck


  • Patpowers silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Nice work on this! AMEN!!

  • goalsv
    July 20, 2008
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    A powerful and deep prayer!

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