One of the hardest things,
is going through everyday.
Knowing one after another,
a love won't meet halfway.
Like a piece has ran away,
left you embracing nothing.
Yet carrying on day by day,
wishing the pain didn't sting.
Put it in the back of your mind,
and maybe it won't hurt as much.
As you feel alone and forgotten,
like a dusty, and abandoned hutch.
Once full of many great memories,
wishing more to be placed inside.
Wanting to feel filled with love,
where two hearts have once collide.
Yet until that day comes to pass,
around every corner tears shall fall.
One by one they shall break us down,
just like a hammer to a porcelain doll.
What did you think
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I love the ending part...i love how it comes full circle to explain the title...i always thought that was a clever way to end poems...
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i loved the flow to this,
and the way all yoru stanza's are the same lengh,
i love it, keep penning,
kitty xxxx
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Nicely done
I liked the flow to it...very nice. And the message remained heavy even though there were a few phrases I felt it could've done without. But thats just me, I throughly enjoyed it. -
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