Each step I take
brings me closer
to my journeys end.
When I look back
upon my life
it's so hard to comprehend.
I have loved and lost,
sometimes thinking I will never
find love again.
Is this the end?
A contest entry
- Quickie 7 spots (prompt already up) by Hope Angel.
300 points, ended August 15, 2008, 10 entries
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1200 points, ended September 13, 2008, 340 entries
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390 points, ended July 2, 33 entries
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Brief and pretty
Lovely,gentle,pretty poem,perfect for the prompt.Brief,told the story,conveyed the moment.Fantastic.10/10. well done. -
This is wonderfully written. I don't think it needs a re-work at all, or any changes for that matter. Beautiful
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I actually wanted more! The initial thoughts were there but I feel like it needs some oomph. Maybe re-work the last stanza a little.
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I like it.. And it really makes u think Great write!!!
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A very interesting and thought provoking qwrite. thanks for entering and good luck
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That was a good poem. ^
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Wonderful
I really enjoyed this so much feeling in so few words...wonderful write!
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wow
Forces me to ponder the same thought
you speak volumes i nthis short poem dear
I hope you win every contest you enter this in
I also love the photo,really breath taking.
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