Fast flowing memories run dark and cold.
Enfold a stifled mouth of times gone past.
Glassed crystal globes of love's abuse retold.
Foretold stories of your fables, recast.
Surpassed by truth that lover's never scold.
Remold a tale that breeds liar's, so vast
Grassed meadows near the river's edge, so bold
Told many colored schemes, clear water's passed.
Blast my watered words, I'll no longer hold!
Behold, the flowing lies, bridge's amassed.
Contrast with truth, acknowledge streaming mold.
Patrolled old memories that you controlled,
Paroled to ever watch the truth unfold.
Author notes
Contemporary Princess sonnet, with alternating beginning and end rhyme,
as created by Allan R. Emery
Three Quatrain's and a couplet, each Quatrain has 4 lines,
A couplet has 2 lines
Each line has 10 syllables
Rhyme Scheme for beginning rhyme lines:
S1: baba
S2: dcdc
S3: fefe
Rhyme Scheme for ending rhyme lines:
S1: abab
S2: cdcd
S3: efef
Ending couplet: gggg
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 7 Old - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended August 15, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you Think???
Comments
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NICE!!!!!
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Thank you for your entry in the contest. A very interesting and unusual sonnet form, but one we felt was a little too repetitive, but a very good poem.
Sue and Jeff


