I am the sunset that you missed
The night the moon forgot
I am the one death couldnt kiss
With life my lips were locked
I am the broken heart that smiles
The tearless eye that cries
I am a boneless souless child
With a hopeless potent mind
I am all you you've ever wanted
None you've ever seen
I am the peak atop the summit
And the plummit of a dream
Very few can stomach what ive seen
I am the tongue kiss of a queen
The abundance of a king
An angel hunting for his wings
I am the objective
The subject of the message
The inner descriptive sentence
Pertaining to whats destined
I am the second, the minute
I am life with precision...
A contest entry
- Contest for member of Beautiful Minds Dark Addictions by islekine.
910 points, ended August 4, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I am... by Desdmona.
800 points, ended April 21, 33 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very very good. I was hooked from the first line and I couldn't wait to keep going. My heart went out to you. Your diction and imagery was well portrayed. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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there's nothing left to be said, its just so....amazing
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Wow. It's so... great
Good luck
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Aloha!
Love this...You are everything...
thanks for entering! Best wishes in the contest.
Write on!
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