corners of dark intent
a skirt slit to hip
while fingers stroke
bloody glass of thoughts
and its sweet tasting
to mere mortals and fools
she inhales him
envisages lips
drinking more than wine
flips the waiter a tip
and jangles the key
to her heart
room 666
Author notes
[7]I saw her today at the reception
In her glass was a bleeding man
She was practiced at the art of deception
Well I could tell by her blood-stained hands
-You Can't Always Get What You Want, Rolling Stones
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A contest entry
- Allure by phantasyintrigue-x.
473 points, ended July 21, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on the bronze. Unfortunately, I've been caught in that web of deceit a time or two when the hunter falls prey to the hunted. Wonderfully woven words you've written here.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Satan smokes!
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"corners of dark intent"
Love this, like someone's being entrapped by all this "dark intent".
"a skirt slit to hip"
What a whore. LoL
"bloody glass of thoughts"
I like this!!
"mere mortals & fools"
Well, at least I'm in good company!!
"drinking more than wine"
Oh wow--that's deep. I like.
"room 666"
Okay, '666' was just to get a laugh out of me, right? (:
Thanks for entering Fireshooting fireshooter
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& THAT is the coolest emoticon ever...first emoticon I learned to do on AP, thanks to Jacks
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hehe
Oy!! I've got a skirt slit to the hip
mwahaha
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For what, bar-hopping?
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Not bar hopping...hip hopping love in the clubs
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WHAT!!! LMAO you old people make ME feel old
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Enough of the 'OLD' cynical sis!!!
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Shut up slut LMAO
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Oh I am so going to find your mother for that one!!! hehehe
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Don't you dare!
LoL, I just finished rereading The Other Boleyn Girl, and everybody calls Mary/Anne Boleyn a whore/slut like every 2 pages.
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lol Yah but that was like the 16th century lol not relevant!!!
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Well, casual rudeness made a comeback.
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Yes indeed
And for when I just want to freak people out with my legs
Enjoy the freak show folks!!! (ps. they're VERY muscular lol) -
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Now Jess thinks we're sluts oh boy has she got a lot to learn when she grows up!!! hahaha
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We'll try not to corrupt her too much!
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lol Mine are too but that's so I get a better grip on things!!!!!
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Wahoo... go us with muscular legs!! My calves freak out the bodybuilders!
I agree.. all the better to grip with lol
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hehe and we have to work damn hard to keep em that way too!
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LMAO like a true athlete
My legs are surprisingly long for such a short person I have a short torso.
Bar-hopping? You were supposed to deny that like a wholesome person!! LMAO
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haha Me too!!!! and it's black
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Wow brilliant take hun!!! Many of those kind of women around.. and many foolish men who think the intention is other than what it is!! lol
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lol I wish I could be one for a day lol would love to say innocently 'the devil made me do it!'
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LMAO I say that all the time now!!
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wooo, this is good! it was almost like you were telling a short story...and you knew where it was going. great take ...i really like this. Good luck in the contest
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lol often I think women like this are the devil in disguise or are men just blind
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Men aren't blind they just don't look at the horns.
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ha ha...that's terrible...but so true! I think both. women can be evil, and men are just blind...j/k men! lol
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