I'm the girl
the girl who used sex as love at 13
and gave her innocence to the wrong guy
the girl who still sits up at night and cries
the girl who still questions why
the girl who sometimes wishes to die
the one who realized
but only when it was too late
and now has to live
with her big mistake
A contest entry
- TELL ME ABOUT IT..... by xwarriorXprincessx.
550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 52 entries
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Comments
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Oh, girl, I know how you feel..I gave mine up at nine to someone who was so wrong..he messed my life up and my head up and I'm still not sure it's back on straight.
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oh honey...
this was short, simple, to the point but no less heart wrenching than any other.... i feel almost as if i know you just from reading this, and that is a good thing! You let me into your story and didn't shadow it with allusions or metaphors. you gave it to me straight and i really appreciate that, but at the same time i sympathize, dear.
I hope you can find some answers in time. I hope that your experiences only lead to emotional strength later
take care and best wishes
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this poem is true for so many people...including me....is it true for yu or are you just writin?
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wow i love your poem thats soooooooo true
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