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Shining Souls

Missing image
Dancing in the night sky
for my pleasure
Illuminating my world
with your pleasant glow
Never shadowing anyone
shining souls

Author notes

Prompt is: FIREFLIES

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A contest entry

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  • PurringKitten
    July 21

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    dancing fireflies in the night, so very soft playing in the moon's light...delicate and o' so sweet, never over powers, just tender and meek

    beautiful words from my sweet PET
    congrats on the HM well deserved


  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 19

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    Sweet and creative...love the ending for they shine so bright but yet never brighter then a loving soul...
    well done...
    thank you for entering!

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 19

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    Aww that's sweet! Fireflies are so cute!

    (eek the background colour hurts my eyes tho lol)

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