Burning
Yearning
Wanting you
Nothing I can do
You don't love me
I shouldn't love you
Just let me fade away
And just sit here day by day
Don't want to forget
Don't want to remember
Wanting to die
Or just let out a sigh
I'm sorry my love
I wish I didn't have this
I can't stop these feelings
So just throw me into an abyss
The jealousy eating me away
My heart scarred with pain
I don't even know what to say
Just let the blood drip from my brain
Sitting in a room of darkness
No glimmer of hope shining through
So let me remedy the problem
For tonight no one leaves this room..
Author notes
Sorry...
A contest entry
- Love prompt by Shifting.
375 points, ended July 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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raw emotion
however i don't think the spiderman bg really fits for this type of piece.
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very good. As someone pointed out, the "u" is somewhat childish but the idea is very saddening. I don't really get the spiderman connection but maybe you just like that background. This is a dark write.
Thanks for entering. -
who ever this about you need to let them go, there are more fish in the sea and this person isnt your nemo.
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Only two things that bothered me about this "U" and SpiderMan.. Painful write that brought tears to my eyes. Just.. Amazing.
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