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From Start to Finish (40 words)

Needing love
from the start,
tears flow
to be held.

Youthful ways
love taken,
parents hold tight.

Teen years
searching for love,
friendship
arms wrap close.

Adult wisdom
sets in,
like a babe,
love and touch
is all that's needed.

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prompt- life is like running in circles

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  • KayJay gold member
    August 15

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    How did I miss this one? A wonderful write that encompasses a lifetime of feeling... Congrats on the Silver!
    Ken

  • sad..
    i love you
  • I do think that you did a great job with this prompt and I wish you much luck in her contest Be well