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Place of Escape

Those huge windows draw me in...
like a kid urging his friend to
make the well-feared leap.
He can't not do it....
Just like I can't not go in.

Those huge windows hint at
the warm tones and pleasant aromas
treasured by the few quiet frequenters.
Eclectic  furniture placed with coziness in mind.
Nothing matches...giving it a unique attractiveness.

Suddenly, I find myself inside, not even
knowing that my feet had carried me anywhere.
A scary looking bat of a woman trudges around
behind a counter filled with all of the coffee necessities.
...her infinitely caring eyes redeem her bird-like qualities.

Bookshelves scatter the walls and tables
dot the room with boardgame like randomness.
I think to myself with delight,"Oh, what an escape!"
I fall into the nearest squishy seat that seems to
swallow me whole, and dream of how I got here.

Author notes

hmm....i just dunno bout this one, ahaha. If I owned a place tho, it would be something like this.

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  • Simpatia
    July 29

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    This reminds me of my countless days spent in coffee shops!!!! I love to go there and hang out, read, write, do homework, relax... Always fun.
  • i like it lauren sounds like a cute place. the color is a little hard to read tho
  • let me know if the color contrast makes it too hard to read and i'll change it.