when you look at her, what do you see?
a typical teenage girl everyone wants to be?
its what you don't see thats hiding inside
its pain and sorrow that deeply intensifies
each night tears and blood quickly leek
as she cuts herself she quietly seeks
something to fix all her problems, so quick
but it seems to her everything is a nasty little trick
she does so many wrongs
never any rights
her parents are suffering
all that she can see
she feels all their pain
as she slowly begins to parish in great flames
she wants to die
so here she lies
streaming blood and tears
what do you think?!?!?
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bravo
this poem truly paints a picture inside of my head. the rythmic pattern is very enteresting my friend. very heart wrecnhing for this sad girl.
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