I hate your dopy laugh
I hate the way you yell
I hate the way you look at me... when your dissapointed at me
I hate how you nose crinkles when your mad
but.......
I love the way you hug me
I love the way you smile
I love the way you make me feel on a cold rainy day
and i love the way you cry when im in pain
I like you for who you are....
But I love you for all your flaws!
Author notes
ummm something about one of the friends i like....
do u like it?
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that's interesting; all my poems are mostly just about hating people and not loving them so saying the things you hate about the person and than talking about what you love about them really puts knew life into them. After all, there's bad and good in everyone so you shouldn't just be looking at the bad! Sheesh, this is the longest comment I've ever wrote! Anyways, I love it!
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This one's fun to read, and is laid out very well.
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how very cute. You should show that person this if you havn't already
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Its pretty good. The emotions are there and make it believable. It truly is a wonderful poem and something alot of people go through in their lives.
Now I'm going to sleep so I'll read your other poem later.
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Emotion flows
We can all go through this emotions from time to time, it flows along nicely except the line, "I love the your smile". I'm sure you meant to say, "I love the way you smile". Otherwise emotionally touching.
I Too have a poem called I Hate You, different to yours though. -
I'm leaving this comment with my PSP. I'm so cool.
LOVE YOUR POEM!
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this was short and so god dang beautiful i loved it it was not what i expected this ish great i wat to read more more whahahah -bows-great work
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this poem really speeks to me
aww, i felt the same way about my ex... such a sad time.
good job, i can feel the emotions runing through the verses.
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