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Dark Autumn Solace

Clinging to a slender thread of hope
I struggle hard to gain my soul's release
In the dark, I fight and blindly grope
I'm driven hard to give my spirt peace

Will I find my peace when I am dead?
Is solace to be found within the dark?
Will blackness cradle me and stroke my head?
Is my only comfort cold and stark?

Shivering, I cut the strands that tether
Setting my soul free to live again.
Burried 'neath the feilds of flame and heather,
Hoping that my dreams are not in vain.

Tomorrow you will hear me on the breeze.
I will bare my soul and start to sing,
A song so sad it brings you to your knees.
A tugging at your heart my memory brings.

(c) Isaw June 2, 2008

 

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  • DreamCatcher6
    July 23
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    Wow beautiful. it touched my heart ..You are very talented my friend..keep writing

  • Spiritual Soul
    July 20

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    Awesome write!! this was beautiful along with the picture. Awesome imagery and words, I loved this, keep it up and I hope you like it here!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~
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    • isaw gold member
      July 23
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      thank you friend. so far I really like the site, but I'm still stumbling around. it's not too complicated but there's sooo much ool stuff! peace!

  • Nothing But No
    July 19

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    The picture is lovely first of all and the piece is so well formatted. The rhyme is spot on and the message is well presented. Thank you for sharing

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