Seems I always
buy a ticket
for the merry-go-round
even though
my arms are too short
to grasp the brass ring
without falling from my painted pony
A contest entry
- Back to Where I was...... by the tempest.
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Very beautiful I like this approach and i enjoyed very much thank you for entering!
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awwww!!!! i love this!! it been so long since i rode on one of those painted pony...this is just beautiful..perfect..a lovely snapshot of childhood..congrat on the gold..u deserved it!
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Painted poinies are worth the trip in themselves. Life is but an adventure besides we could grow taller over night =) love this it is what we women do.
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loved this...sarcastic and smart!
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Interesting contemplation. If the brass ring is not to be had, one promoted purpose of the circular ride, (ending where you began) is nullified.
Since you persist in ticket purchases, perhaps your personal enjoyment is found in some other feature of the ride? The close-up of beautiful and fantastic animals in their brilliant colors and bejewelled harnesses or the pleasure of the company of enjoyed companions?
Beautiful inclusion of all my highlights and memory triggers in this brief write..."Carousel," "ticket," "merry-go-round," "brass ring," and "painted pony."
Thank you for a bright field trip to those memories!
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So Cute
This is just precious. The good old merry-go-round. Those special childhood memories are ever so sweet, at least these ones. Thank you for sharing with me.
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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