Life, naked and ripe,
claws at frigid skin.
Spring.
A contest entry
- AP 2008: Become Published by B Chandler.
2000 points, ended August 3, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What be your thoughts?
Comments
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it might be short but I have read it over and over letting it soak in and the more I read the more I see that just shows how slow I am lol mmm not help my case hear. spring is a time when we defrost from winter...
Cyber Artist


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short and straight to the point on imagery
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I very much like this image of Spring bursting to escape the cold confines of Winter--well done.
Bill



