Your heart to me
gives off a golden glow
Things you share
only I will ever know
Golden band upon my hand
You paid for it over a grand
Sweet memories made
are golden to me indeed
For all my life
it is only you I need
A contest entry
- - 500 GOLD Series - Need 3 more to close by Florida Sunshine.
800 points, ended July 31, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the last stanza of this poem the best.
There's nothing wrong with this.
--Aden
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So true
Often the young start out their marriage with such debts they are overwhelmed in the short time and yet those who marry and let their love be their wealth stay together forever
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What a wonderful poem. Not very many words, but so much feeling. Great Job, and thank you for your comment on my poem.
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congrats on the silver and thank you for entering. Reminds of of a day I tried on a diamond solitaire and it was over ten grand. I gasped in horror and prayed that it would come off of my finger. thanks for entering
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Whoop!
Beautiful write! Nice rhyme and flow. Imagery wise, very well done. Thanks for the entry and good luck in my contest!!!
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Very beautiful write. Cherish the feelings that inspire such feelings. Keep up the good work @};-
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i love this poem and i love the way the rhyme is and you did a beautiful job with the prompt of gold, i have a poem called golden beads you may have read it, i like how you say "for all my life it is only you i need" that shows that the golden ring is just a symbol of his love and that you would love him even if you didnt have that ring keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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The ending is the best! Material things doesn't ever compare when you have the one you love. The poem is beautifully said! Well done! I enjoyed the read ~ Including your rhyme, makes a lovely accent to the piece.
Terrific job! Thanks for entering in the contest & sharing this with me.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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