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Fireflies

The dark night sky
Illuminated beautifully
As we lay hand in hand
In awe of the beautifully glowing fireflies.

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I hope this is what you had in mind.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    July 22

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    Liked this interpretation you wrote of the prompt given for this contest. Not many of these little fireflies in this area, but can imagine the awesome wonder one feels when watching them fly around .


  • catie052 gold member
    July 19

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    what a delicate piece. very beautiful. "illuminated beautifully" Great imagery in the piece as a whole...good luck