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[ blizzard overhead ]

blizzard overhead
clouds of pure white butterflies
christmas in July

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    This is the kind of blizzard I would love to experience, Butterflies are so beautiful, to see them in masse would be wonderful. I love the imagery and the illusion of a blizzard in a summer month. Well Done my friend.

    Dennis


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 22, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    blizzard overhead
    clouds of pure white butterflies
    christmas in July

    Wonderfully expressed.
    A nice description for the places which have winter in July.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • albymyheart gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Ohhh..."clouds of pure white butterflies" what a lovely thought for snow. If feel the last two lines speak of the softness and beauty of a snowfall, yet the word "blizzard" in the first line is a harsher descriptive word, so to me there is conflict here. But maybe you had something else in the back of your mind while writing this? I love it anyway...alby