I dont have perfect hair,
I dont have the perfect body,
I dont have perfect features,
I dont have to be perfect,
So why cant i be accepted?
My hair goes wavy in the rain,
My weight never stays the same,
I can't keep the spots off my face,
I dont have long legs blonde hair and blue eyes,
Why can't you accept me as i am?
You remind me of Hal from the film "Shallow Hal",
Maybe you should be hypnotised,
So you can see the inner beauty in people,
And not the outer beauty,
Outer beauty is not everything,
You are too shallow to see,
One is never perfect and everyone has flaws,
So learn to see the inner beauty and personality,
That is all one needs to be near perfect.
Copyright: Karlie67 : 2007
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wow I like the truth in this that a lot of people are just blind to others
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I can see your inner beauty from this write, it doesnt matter what others think, you know you are beautiful within and thats all that matters.
The world is unforgiving when it stares us in the face, we yearn for its acceptance and acknowledgment but we must accept ourselves for who we are first, i know because i've been there.
I hope you all the best
Ken
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Brilliantly said! Bravo!
Brilliantly said! Bravo! This is so empathc and poetically graphic too, fine sculpting and perfect flow and rhyme, great true to life sentiments and reflective without any shadow of doubt of what many people think and feel about themselves and how they are viewed by others. Tou have penned perfection here, well done, bravo, love it, you should be in print, one day I feel sure you will be too and I will back you all the way too!
Poetic Love & Hugs & Loads of pats on the back!
Mum!
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(Kaz.. Kazytc)
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This is awesome!! Every girl has felt this way...not perfect. I really feel this piece...nicely done
~Jillybean128
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