You find your self in a forest,
It looks like a rain forest.
You're walking through the trees,
You feel a beautiful soft breeze.
Your can see lovely tropical creatures,
With beautiful little features.
You can just see a purple sky,
You let out a little sigh.
Just ahead there is an island,
On a very high land.
There stands a castle,
In a far off land from all the hassle!
A beautiful sea surrounds,
Around the castle grounds.
It feels like such a dream,
And yet so supreme.
You make your way up to the land,
The castle looks so grand.
Inside the beautiful castle,
It has white drapes with tassles.
The castle seems so vacant,
But you hear a distant chant.
You go in search of this voice,
and finally you can rejoice.
You find a tall dark male,
He says you look pale.
He gives you some beautiful clothes,
And gives you a pink rose.
You finally have a place to sleep,
No more sleeping in a rubbish heap!
Copyright : Karlie67 : 2007
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A contest entry
- Fantasy! And Nothing More. by CrystalFlower.
410 points, ended August 19, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fairy tales and Fantasies! by Doll Faise.
700 points, ended August 11, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It's nice but I found myself getting a little bored with the rhyme scheme. The rhymes are too easily predicted. Though, the form was nice. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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Please red the rules of my contest. But it's very lovely.
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How Romantically enchanting!
Wow this is brimming richly with beautiful and well chosen graphic and poetic descriptives, and painting a fabulous fantasy picture that is so well sculpted and conveyed that it makes the reader feel as if they were right there with you in this beautiful dream-scape and fantasy scenario. Brilliant, very well penned and naturally e xpressive, not to mention bewitchingly captivating.
Well done, love it! Bravo, write on! Aim for print! YOu CAN do it!
Poetic Love & Hugs & Loads of pats on the back!
Mum!
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(Kaz.. Kazytc)
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