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Louise

There is a girl named Louise,
Who think she is the bees knees.

She dates the guy next door,
She is a right old bore.

She's very insecure,
And also very immature.

She copies me with my style,
And has an awful fake smile.

She thinks I will steal her guy.
And also thinks im sly.

She's very possessive.
And thinks she's so impressive!

She's got filthy rich parents,
She makes you want antidepressants!

She likes to brag
Shes a right little hag!

She such a bitch you see.
Wouldn't you agree?

Copyright: Karlie67 : 2007

Author notes

This is about a girl who was quite nasty and I lived next door to her boyfriend she always through I would steal her boyfriend and was always quite loud to attract attention to herself.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Interesting read

    Oh often the ones who have everything are the loneliest people in the world for they dont know how to act around normal people .All they have been taught to do is brag and show off what they have .Often they are left with sitters all the time so they dont know the mening of family as you or I .Sad it is have you asked her why


  • Ken-Maverick
    August 9, 2008

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    HAHAHAHAHAHA

    The poem that tell of a story in real life are the best ones.
    Keep writing Karlie,
    then watch out mum...Karlie gonna take over