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Rsvp

  

 

I brought the sexy saxaphone,

and pulsing low bass guitar

to gently sway the room

into laughter and bold heart.

 

You see,

I never learned to play!

Sweet sigh, Damn....

but the what the...

how hard can it truly be?

 

I'll pass the microphone,

and ask them to word the tune,

sing to me sweet darlin'

I got the Bushyman blues....

 

interesting it will be,

to hear the telling....

the political and comical

single and married..

tease us with poetic imagery.

 

Of course,

we'll have to gag the horny..

always one or two

at every party!

 

But hey..

how hard can it be?

sorry..

poetic

simile brutally

fondled.

 

I am honored 

proudly

to boldly RSVP.

See ya at the party!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: invite to Ms.Sexy pre-party!

I don't need liquor to loosen up and be silly.
Just give me a saxaphone, low bass guitar,
and we'll jump their souls as laughter fills the air!
p.s. it's typically the "quiet" ones that shock the absolute most!


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  • individuality gold member
    July 23

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    a good piece of poetry, well we do not need ot play any instrument in this day and age as we have digital technology, just flick a switch and the party begins.


  • humblpye gold member
    July 23
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    Oh yeah...

    Blues always does it for me! gimme a sax and a lonesome train whistle anytime, and I'll give you a song, can't play sax but I ain't too bad with a good ol fashioned 6 string! but hey!, you did a real fine job there!, some cheeky lil' "bites" in there, that second last stanza, holy cow that really sizzles girl!!
    Well done!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 22

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    lovely write here ears i think you did a very great excellent job here good luck to you in the contest i enjoyed this

  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 21
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    you are right a good jazz band and you got your own high all night. I liked this a lot
  • Trafalger679Curious
    July 19

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    Superb

    A really humorous write. As a 'quiet one', I love that description cause in past years, it fit me to a tee.
    An excellent write. I loved the imagery.

  • Ephiphany
    July 19

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    I think you did a nice job

    with this RSVP I don't need liquor either lovely piece sis, good luck to you
    -ephiphany


  • Swangrnv
    July 19

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    l.o.l.

    Sounding a bit saucy! Very smooth, cool and piece! perfect for a hot party! lots of luck to you in the contest!

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