Slowly, beautifully, like the dawn,
the reality of love dawned upon me,
and I knew then- that love was not just,
a lullaby sung,
to put lust to sleep...
A contest entry
- love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 2, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice
yes love and lust are differant,very nice.
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... yes, only that it is for everything to become awake in!
Much like this!
Sol
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interesting to see how love makes us see things in different angles.....
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to put lust to sleep, now that's one energetic thought. You surely know how to sing a lullaby!
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Ah so soft so true so beautiful ...
yes ... Love embraces all lovely emotions ... and rectify all sad ones ... Your eyes are not only beautiful, Poetess, they also see Beyond.
Love
Myra
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Lovely!
Thanks for sharing you!
-Timothy
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beautiful thoughts here, I like the image and the turn of it. very nice.
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Beautiful!
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Wonderful!
A heart filled with love spills onto everything!
These are beautiful lines you have written
and they express what true love is!
Thanks, Jane
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very true and very effective point you have raised..I love it.....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece in my contest...
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Deep
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