tears of a crestfallen angel
at the break of dawn.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 46 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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>> OMG my last entry too comment on!! <<
I agree with Rose; a simply gorgeous piece of writing yet the impression is really sad
Yeah; just put simply, loved it ^^
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x
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Awww... so sad yet so beautiful. I love the use of words in this.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
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10 words if places in the right order can mean so much thou they are so little, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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this is sad and deep with such meaning in each line and word. it speaks with such intensity. well done sweetie
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sad
but beauiful
like you -
We all have times in our lifes that tears fall and go answered by those that are to care sorry that you feel that this is you take care
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