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A little night music

I waited for the moment when she floated through my heart
As she flew on shafts of love around the world
In my dream I hear the music that her kisses can impart
As she lovingly ensures that I've been girled
'Cross the stars that fill the sky with little diamonds of light
She has conquered me with arrows from above
I just want to spend my life in singing music to the night
As we fly across the oceans filled with love
Gentle murmurs of my heartstrings plucked by fingers playing Strauss
As my angel of the night conducts her band
Distant echoes of her laughter as she runs into her house
And she sings the songs she knows I'll understand
Sparkling music floating downward from our dance-floor on a cloud
Cheers the nights of everybody down below
When I feel her in my dreaming I must sing my love out loud
While my lover shows the moon the way to glow


Author notes

"Listen to the pretty sound of music as she flies." -- "Mother Nature's Son" by the Beatles.

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  • Coffer
    August 2

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    An amazing write by an amazing writer, great job on the prompt, I look forward to the judging for the both of us. Good luck, its an honor to compete with a writer such as yourself.

  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 19
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    hail the king of romance

    If it isn't too Cyrano, 'spose you could get me girled? And if it doesn't hurt, of course.