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swallows have returned

swallows have returned
soaring, swooping here and there
don't forget your hat

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 27, 2008
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    I can relate to this very well done


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    July 19, 2008
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    A lovely haiku with great imagery! All the best..

    Charishma