an insect hangs
in the swallow's beak -
crunch!
A contest entry
- SWALLOW HAIKU CONTEST by Swan song.
450 points, ended July 27, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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OUCH lol That was good!!!
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Great
It has been awhile since I have been able to comment on a haiku. This was just so instantaneous and funny after I've had such a struggle with getting to sleep. Thank you for offering this haiku toward your audience; perhaps, I will be able to rest now that I've laughed. May your day be blessed as always.
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Thanks so much!!
Charishma
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Oh my gosh, bye bye little bug! A good haiku on the prompt indeed, good luck in the contest.
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Thanks!
Hi my dear friend!! So good to hear from you. I have been very busy ever since I became Principal of my school from 16th June! My life is sooo challenging now. I miss the days of haiku writing. Hope all is well with you and your dearest husband and your school life too.
Hugs and so much love,
Charishma
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