Lovers, they come and go
Even the closest friends don’t stay
But deep in my heart I know
You will never fade away
Dreams don’t always last forever
And the beautiful decomposes to dust
But for you I can say never
For you in my life is a must
Money is spent
Empires fall
The sun rises
And it sets
Every day
But you will always be there
The memory of us may even stay
Long after we are dead
You I can always count upon
To never leave
We were together from the day I was born
And we will be till the day I die
Bi polar disorder lasts a lifetime
Author notes
Dedicated to Pete
Im sorry you must love me so strongly while me and my disorder make your love painful every day
But i will always love you
I have bi polar disorder
Ville Valo is my favorite writer, he is a most beautiful and talented lyricist
A contest entry
- Kill me with the last line. by Loki.
1750 points, ended July 25, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This love must be pwerful, to stick around in the face of such a difficult disorder. Thanks for sharing this sweet poem.
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Bipolar is a rough disorder to have to live with. I know this from personal experience. Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck with your bipolar
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I am tending to agree that I can understand the complex and confusion of understanding bipolar disorder. My friend is bi polar and I love her to death!!
Lovely write, dear! I am addicted to your poems now!! (and I suppose that couldn't be a horrid thing!)
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Oh my! I know exactly what you mean. It's hard on the ones around us to understand the disorder and if we are lucky we can be in control and have our meds. Good luck in the contest.Pen on...~Poo~
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I loved this the enduing was fabulous, keep writing and hope to read nmore from you soon this is a great piece I loved it x
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nice entry
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Nice entry. Good luck.
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