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Comfortable

My form moving in the dark,
Darkness surrounding my every movement.

Darkness in my skin, in my heart, in my life,
Beautiful darkness surrounded by light.

My love in the darkness sees me, spots me,
Darkness loves me, surrounds me, is me; my love.

Darkness comes and kisses my lips,
Surrounding the earth with its love.

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Picture Prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2413/523.jpg?1216475751 (http://zardo.deviantart.com/art/Earth-blood-91269754).

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  • Spiritual Soul
    July 22, 2008

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    wow you describe the darkness in with such love, I love all the descriptions in this. Great write, thanks for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


    • Kimojuno
      July 22, 2008
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      The darkness isn't "dark" like some people would describe it but is actually quite beautiful, although unfortunately quite misunderstood and misrepresented.


  • MoMoTheFairyTale
    July 20, 2008

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    never seen this before

    wow this is one of the first poems that I have seen describing the darkness in a way that isn't dark at all! makes me wonder how you see the light. A romance of the unkown. amazing but most indeed enteresting


    • Kimojuno
      July 22, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment.

      The darkness isn't "dark" at all, it is actually quite beautiful-mind you most people refer to the dark as something evil, which it is not at all. =)


  • xSarahx
    July 19, 2008

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    I really like this a lot! The picture is awesome too. It kind of looks like a face if you look carefully. Anyway, good luck in the contest, I really enjoyed this!

    • Kimojuno
      July 19, 2008
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      You should enter the contest.


      • xSarahx
        July 19, 2008
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        maybe... kind of not in the mood for writing something with a limitation such as the picture.. i'm still brooding my hate at the moment...

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