My form moving in the dark,
Darkness surrounding my every movement.
Darkness in my skin, in my heart, in my life,
Beautiful darkness surrounded by light.
My love in the darkness sees me, spots me,
Darkness loves me, surrounds me, is me; my love.
Darkness comes and kisses my lips,
Surrounding the earth with its love.
Author notes
Picture Prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2413/523.jpg?1216475751 (http://zardo.deviantart.com/art/Earth-blood-91269754).
A contest entry
- The Beautiful Dark by Spiritual Soul.
1300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be up front and honest and tell me what you think.
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wow you describe the darkness in with such love, I love all the descriptions in this. Great write, thanks for your entry!
Blessings,
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The darkness isn't "dark" like some people would describe it but is actually quite beautiful, although unfortunately quite misunderstood and misrepresented.
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never seen this before
wow this is one of the first poems that I have seen describing the darkness in a way that isn't dark at all! makes me wonder how you see the light. A romance of the unkown. amazing but most indeed enteresting -
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Thanks for the comment.
The darkness isn't "dark" at all, it is actually quite beautiful-mind you most people refer to the dark as something evil, which it is not at all. =)
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I really like this a lot! The picture is awesome too. It kind of looks like a face if you look carefully. Anyway, good luck in the contest, I really enjoyed this!
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You should enter the contest.
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maybe... kind of not in the mood for writing something with a limitation such as the picture.. i'm still brooding my hate at the moment...
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