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Parched Throat (haiku)



parched throat
long flight now ended
swallow time



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  • Polaja Greeters member
    September 11, 2008
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    Hood-Winked!

    This is a beautiful haiku, I love the natural way that these haiku flow from your pen the prompt was very open - and I loved that you took it to the end of the journey, a fulfilling image - well done on the gold - very well deserved!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    July 29, 2008

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    This haiku resonates on many levels and that is what makes it so special. Congrats on the Gold!

    Charishma

  • piccola silver member
    July 27, 2008
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    very clever indeed! I guess when the swallows return they do have parched throats. aha!


  • Swan song gold member
    July 27, 2008
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    I like this hiaku and your use of Swallow time
    that was clever