The tracks lead down the path,
The path leads to my doom.
The doom is that which haunts my mind,
The feeling that haunts my every moment.
The moments that never seem to cease,
The feelings moving around my skin.
The blood I dream of when I sleep,
The black sky I see when I wake.
The darkness overpowering the light,
The dreams overpowering the reality.
The tracks leading down the path,
The train beginning to go off track.
The life overpowering the death,
The depth over powering the life.
The depth of death playing in my mind,
The feelings of insecurity playing in my life.
The darkness overpowering the light,
The light overpowering the death.
The feelings of insecurity over in my mind,
The tracks spilling over in my life.
Author notes
Picture Prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2413/527.jpg?1216477750 by http://zardo.deviantart.com/
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt by Spiritual Soul.
1200 points, ended July 25, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow this was intense, I liked the flow, I felt the darkness creep up on me as I read it. Awesome job, thanks for entering!
Blessings,
~Michaela~ -
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Thank you for reading and the compliments. =)
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