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Mastery of rhyme and rhythm here
Accompanies true creativity,

Unreels and reinforces pattern key
Describing white on black much heart holds dear.
Explicit line line follows, signals clear
Must mock all superficiality -
As Muse with music tunes so all sense, see,
Unchallenged sings true poet's inner ear,
Depth draws, new meanings gleaning, as, sincere,
Eternity meets authenticity.
MAUDlin  expressions banished, light may be
Everlastingly shared, shall never wear.
 May this be the beginning, not the end,
 Masks fall, all questions answered, links extend.

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  • WildlifeDoc silver member
    September 28
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    Great write, I love poems like this, that bare our souls a little bit. I think my favorite part is the last two lines....Masks fall....that is beautiful.
    Perfect imagery for this piece. I can't wait to read more of your work!

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  • French Tries
    July 23

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    Mastery, indeed, accompanies these lines
    In which shimmering transparency replies
    To many questions, - dull and dark depth enlightening,
    Driving links to path of truth, sincerity,
    Where the Poet's words build life renewing fair
    Into meanings found out from a mysterious frame.

  • albymyheart gold member
    July 19

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    Nice sonnet. Has enough words lol. I like the message, which your poetic skill so eloquantly enhances...alby

  • Superb

    A very cool write. I like the way you described the creative process. It is one of the best on this subject that I've seen on AP. As usual, imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine.