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Fight


he thunders
she bows her head
silenced

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 27, 2008
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    This created an image very clear so well done thanks for entering.


  • ennovy silver member
    July 19, 2008

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    Haiku's are about nature so I gather here you are talking about a storm of the most natural things we all know about. Your choice of words are excellent...novy

    count 3,4,3
    I have knowledge of this modern haiku form...

    Well after a some research with this wonderful poetess I learned it can be about a pair of shoes...in this traditional form...Thanks for the information

    Now I see the verbal fight...LOL


    • wonderbandalice
      July 19, 2008
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      It isn't about a storm at all.

      It's about a father yelling at his daughter, and she gives up.

      I've read a lot of haikus that weren't about nature, actually. But thank you.