Dizzy making lines
Drawn opaquely on paper
Curls of gold
Flying with every twist
Colors so broad
Drawing expansive dreams
Closing lashes hard
Preserving lustrous thought
"So close! So close!
I'm almost there!"
Green, gold, blue
Defying all connotations
Creating a world so full
Delicious, play-filled moments
Coming down to me!
and the tip of...
All my coloring pencils.
Author notes
Option 3.
*opaquely - not clear, lucid
A contest entry
- The Prompt Coffee House: Prompt Challenge Round 1: Picture Prompts by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I Loved this!! Ahahaha who would had thought someone could write about crayons?! Kicked butt.
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woot! thanks booch! (thats a friendly word btw) and you know... i mean... I! could write about something like that of course because I! have nothing else to write about =P.
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There's a real sense of a child labouring over using all the crayons in the box here. A lovely use of the prompt.
'Drawing expansive dreams'
a delightfully expressive line, well done.
Thank you for sharing with us
Jem and Ju
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That was lovely. Your words were like a waterfall flowing down the page. Sweet, coloured, rainbow thoughts sketched now for all to see. Well done...alby
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=) Thank you for that. All your nice words. It is much appreciated. <3
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Thank you for your entry, good luck.
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