carry me form this place to another
where life is like that whisker of wind
who knows no borders or boundaries
where loves is in abundance
and two hearts know their destined to be one
cross those lines, marked by men
from where one religion starts and the other ends
paint that picture where colors define unity
bridge that distance from life to being alive
make words mean, what they need to convey.
oh lord almighty, bless each soul
make them feel your presence
make them feel loved
heal the world, heal the world
heal the world
Author notes
prompt- bridges
current contest - "ash-es"
A contest entry
- BRIDGES by Swan song.
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hmm.. interesting.
i don't really read much religous poetry,
but this is a truly beautiful poem.
you have some gorgeous imagery,
i love the lines :
cross those lines, marked by men
from where one religion starts and the other ends
very nice.
ElectricBloom -
Very nice message, good write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Wow that is one heck of a prayer and it sung to me
thank you for your entry.
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thank you
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This reminds a bit to J.Lennon Imagine. Nice written poem, full of heart and soft tunes.
~Sonja~
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