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Revenge

Running through the forest
Not looking back
Fearing that it would be the last.

Hearing the Bloodhounds
Trying to catch their prey
Just made the adrenaline start to pump.

'Please just let me be alone!
Why do you bother me alone!'
The creature cried out.

'You are the monster,
The one that destroyed the village!
And you are the one that shall pay!'

'I destroyed nothing!
For I am a peaceful demon!
and nothing more!'
It tried to reason with the mob.

'It lies!' one says
'Get it!' the leader cries out.

Nothing was heard after that faithful night
No one saw the creature again
For she disappeared into the darkness.

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  • iamthebeatles
    July 30, 2008

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    Wow, I think this poem is awesome. Different then what you usually do but this is amazing in a way. Totally one of my favs from you for sure!
    keep it up you leader of the forest vampire children!


    (the hippie forest farie) cassie