I hate how you think "I'm sorry" will fix everything,
how you can completely betray me without guilt,
how you can make me feel bad for you.
I hate how you crave attention,
how you make everything into a competition,
how you always have to be better than me.
I hate how you get so jealous,
how you think the world revolves around you,
how selfish you are.
I hate how you have no scruples,
how you can tell my secrets to whoever,
how you couldn't care less about my life.
I hate how I love you for your flaws.
A contest entry
- Kill me with the last line. by Loki.
1750 points, ended July 25, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such an emotion-packed poem. i really liked the last line. great way to end it.
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"i hate how i love you for your flaws" love this line very powerful and really good for ending the poem
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whos this about neways??
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it was for a contestyy
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Oh WOW!
What an amazing poem!
I loved the last line especially, it's really powerful! This is exactly how I feel about my boyfriend sometimes, he's all those things you described so perfectly. It flows beautifully, I love it!
x AMAZING write.
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Thank you!
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OMG that is exactly what im feeling right now. Yet another brilliant write from a brilliant writer <3
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Thanks for the entry. Good luck.
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Not. Fair.
I love the repetition of "I hate how you...," and then the three-lines after it. I've felt like this before...
I hate how you write so wicked amazingly.
I love the last line; it pulled it together like amazingness in a bottle. Best of luck in the contest. -
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thank you shelly belly!
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