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Is My Ugly Showing?

 

 

 

 

 

   You know that feeling

when a part of you is lost in the breeze,

 a piece of you that's never exposed?

 

 

                    That cold burns my soul.

 

  We all know we shouldn't

 

 

  but timetime

                           again

 

 we all do

those things

                     that stoke the ice

                                              

                                                         in our tundras-

 

           God,

                    it's ugly.

 

 

       But God,

 

 

 

You still want to be where I am...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

what's more shocking than God's unfailing love dispite all our obvious spite against His will?

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  • MelodiousDreaming
    October 3, 2008

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    I've read quite a few of your pieces and I must say I've found myself gaping, you have a beautiful way with words. Such talent, it invokes envy

    I think I've found myself a new favorite ^_^


  • movedon
    July 19, 2008

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    It IS amazing that God still loves us despite how disgusting we are. But, His death washses us clean and it's that truth that I cling to each and every day that reminds me He loves me!! A wonderful write!

    Warmest,
    Mylee

    1 cor 16:14


  • Loki silver member
    July 19, 2008
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    Thank you for the entry and good luck.