Windmill Skies
By Kazytc
Picture Prompt Contest by Holyman Allpoetry.com
July 2008
Windmill of the skies,
Round and round it spins,
Hot Air Balloons around like flies,
Dwarfed by the sails of time in twins,
Plus the grass,
And White flowers amass!
Copyright Kazytc
July 2008
Author notes
Picture Prompt Contest by Holyman Allpoetry.com
July 2008
In a list
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie! Interesting image! by retribusive.
523 points, ended August 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ya know, the picture actually ruins the poem for me, now that its out of the contest, i think you should drop the picture and let the wonderful images from your writing stand as they are...yes, you have described the image well, its just that the words are so much better.
blessings and best wishes,
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