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i cant write anymore with out you...

I cant write
Even though I want to
I don’t have the words

Life
Love
Understanding

All in my head
But when it comes out it makes no sense

It seems that I can only write
When I’m with you

No words
Just movement

Poetry at its best
My head on your chest

Love
And heartache

Everything
And nothing

All intertwined
As our body’s conjoin

I only write when I have something
Now I have nothing

Cause you are my everything
And she has you

I know that I am in love
And yet so confused

Even though I feel used
I want make poetry

Make it with you
And only you

Poetry at its best
When it just me and you

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  • "Poetry at its best
    When it just me and you" perfect lines to fit my life! wow i loved this good job
    xoxo- christina

  • wow

    hun i know ur hurt but it might be time to try to move on. i know its hard trust me but he may not be comming back. im just saying. love ya


  • AngelEyes13
    July 24
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    Great work.
  • I agree with what the other author said. I know the pain may be fresh and I also know it takes some time to get over it but use it to actually write something from deep within, make the pain work for you.

    I wsh you well.

  • hey gurlie, i've been in your shoes kinda and your love for this guy will take you a dark place cause i've been there too.and don't let him rule your poetry!

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