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Cynical

disastrously embittered
over the deafening whiteness
In all our eyes.

A contest entry

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  • Cannonsfire
    July 22, 2008

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    I have green eyes thanks and I'll keep them that way, I see what others don't trust me


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    I've come back too this one a few times now; it always intrigues me

    So interesting and thought probing for those ten simple words

    Thank you for taking the time too enter;
    I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 20, 2008
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    Forgot them *oops*

  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    Great work in getting the much said in so little words.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 20, 2008
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    wow
    simply stunning
    you've said alot in only 3 lines

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    July 20, 2008
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