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Midnight Red Shoes (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

Midnight Red Shoes (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

Hello fogged Harlem dungeon of twinkling

Buzzing noise, watch out midnight stroll.

 

Sista red shoes come to pull the price tag of your muse

And shine your flute to the beep de bop

Country fried steak of juicy flow of

Border line momma Louie Anna

Platteville. Just cruising the six four of his

Infatuated Blvd. and left scars of the sitcom

Of switching hip drums and creative tongue

Pulled out the collard greens of his busted Sims

With the biggie bang swig of my neo style.

 

Gansta brother do you dig the spade card I am playing.

Lets hit the midnight hour of I dropped a bomb

On smooth skin annex and gave employment

To adore cool breeze every time you see

Seduction just pass the cigar treats.

 

And ride the midnight train back to Georgia

For southern red beans and Chapel Hill sausages

And let apostrophes scream catch that hen

Now for the brew of Coca Cola Club Jazz Lolo

Because sista word Satchmo is in the building

To drizzle the sizzle of work the style trend

In new age century.

 

Sista red shoes leaving a clapping sooth.

 

 

Neo Soul Poetry Artist :

The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

Author notes

Midnight Red Shoes (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

This may be the weirdest poem you read
And want be the last weirdest thing
But I create style thats why I am neo.
I have old soul always have for some reason.
Practicing waiting on the track to be re altered
Tryin to kill time what ever wacky today
thanks.

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  • NikkiLovesYou
    September 2
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    This was something new to me, but I really like it...

  • Meroza gold member
    August 19

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    This is wonderfully written, and you speaking those words with jazz in the background gave it a special feel to it.
    You did excelent!

    Best wishes ^_^

  • Confusing

    I like the way you say the poem, but the poem itself is quite confusing

  • bladesofblood
    August 11
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    It's

    It's nice.


  • Avie
    August 9

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    damn not only was your voice perfect for the part but the words were excellent in this new time age with an old feel* perfect
  • tis was creepy...
    *scared*
    • well u are quite a scary cat then remind me never have you protect me you are sissy lmao thanks anyway

  • la dolce vita silver member
    August 7
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    This piece was well done. I enjoyed it very much!

  • ravensgift gold member
    July 30
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    WhooHooo. I loved this!!

  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 21

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    great! I loved it!

    And ride the midnight train back to Georgia
    For southern red beans and Chapel Hill sausages
    And let apostrophes scream catch that hen

  • just lovely auntie lovely i just was down in Plat a few weeks ago i have a few relatives dinning in their i enjoyed you


  • Brazos silver member
    July 20

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    A little of the old mixed with a whole lot of the new [your style], I love it.

    Did not get the video, but did get the audio and of course I was able to read it, well done baby.

    Brazos


  • secberm
    July 19
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    Well done, sis. Write on. One.

    Dez

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