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Planet of Life



enclosed in cover
firmament filled with others
green habitation




















Words: K.Botka
7/19/08

Author notes

Genesis 1:17 And Elohim set them in the firmament of the heaven to give light upon the earth,

[firmament ] Strong's Concordance: 07549. raqiya`, raw-kee'-ah
- properly, an expanse, i.e. the firmament or (apparently) visible arch of the sky:--firmament.

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  • azure85 gold member
    July 19

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    enclosed in cover
    firmament filled with others
    green habitation

    Thank you for the author's notes, although I do know the original Hebrew and Greek of the Bible quite well. (don't use Strong's much, although it sits well used in my pastor's study) I digressed.....

    You need to bring out images/senses in a haiku. This haiku contains statements, could you provide images to illustrate the same thoughts you have above?

    Thank you so much.



  • Cynewulf
    July 19
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    I think you have really cracked haiku now Kath. This works well.